Started Revisions on "Kittengirls"

Since I work as an editor, one would think I could perhaps glean the best way to fix my own work if giving a few specific points of revision. It really isn't that easy. Some points I'm supposed to work on are "Why is he attractive to her?" and "increase the emotional connection." Easy to say, but how does that look on the page when, in real life, we can't always explain or see those things? It's definitely a challenge. I try so hard not to rely on exposition or internal monologue. My hope is that I avoided it enough in the original version that I can use it to fill in the cracks in the revision.

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